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Re: Everything is so much bigger than you are, back home and right here
growing up asian in america is rough, but no one talks about being asian in asia when you dont know how to be properly asian. i am a sucker for ...
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Re: fading away like the rest of them
i know that this is out of the green room, but i wanted to give my two cents on its meaning. i feel as though it has been misconstrued into ...
Mar 30, 2024 -
Re: everywhere to be found and nowhere at all
i havent reviewed in a while. consider this me fixing that. houses as a metaphor for vulnerability. i dont think thats one i see a lot & it feels wrong ...
Feb 17, 2024 -
Re: two cups
ive always found this concept intriguing, two separate juxtaposing entities coming together like this. it serves as a powerful metaphor for the human condition. i disagree that you should turn ...
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Re: An Evening Kiss
this is a beautiful portrayal of a moment in nature. its very human. your imagery is very evocative. the contrast between the vibrant colors of nature & the tranquility of ...
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Re: Just a sandwich
this is a very well-written internal monologue. personally, i am a sucker for writing like this. its typically a good mixture of realism & idealism. your use of second-person narration ...
Nov 15, 2023 -
Re: Distanced Intimacy
this is a very emotionally charged narrative. thats good to have. your narrative voice is compelling & it offers a very raw perspective on the narrators inner thoughts & feelings. ...
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Re: 6000 Feet Until Deplanement
i wouldnt say i love plays, but i think they are very interesting. your script has a compelling setup with a clear structure, moving back & forth in time to ...
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Re: resisting womanhood
very poignant poem. i think it balances topics well throughout & creates a very harsh emotional backdrop over the course of the poem. the overall themes of shared identity & ...
Nov 13, 2023 -
Re: new skin for the old ceremony
the title captured me instantly. leonard cohen is one of my most respected songwriters & poets, so its only natural i would review this. he chose said title for his ...
Nov 6, 2023 -
Re: raising a functioning child - an informational narrative by a bothered teenager
very thoughtful commentary on family dynamics & generational differences. it can be hard to write about those topics, but this does it well. the nonchalant writing style pairs nicely with ...
Oct 29, 2023 -
Re: A glimpse into the diary of Bellamy Blake: Burdened hearts
i havent watched any of the show this is written about, but i understand a fair bit about the plot. i see the elements of it in here, but i ...
Oct 29, 2023 -
Re: "Sternenhafte Tr??ume." (Starry Dream)
this is frankly a very beautiful poem. its enthralling. you are able to take a few ideas & run with them in a way thats captivating. your visual & emotional ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: Lacking
this is extremely personal, but i relate to it on many levels. as a writer, i can even relate to your struggles on a deeper level. personal narratives can be ...
Oct 28, 2023 -
Re: ​Violating Sexual Scripts and Men and Abstinence
sociology is a very interesting subject. i think this is a solid article all things considered, especially with all of the arguments going around. gender theory is a very complex ...
Oct 28, 2023
