foreveralone

This part was my favorite :D You smile, at the girl behind me. You wink, to let me know I'm just another girl. You wave, to force a goodbye. You ...

I love this poem (: I like this part the most ; I look at other girls Praised, admired For they look like precious pearls Sparkling with beauty Cause of ...

I love this part! He opened his eyes and pulled my hand down. My heart beat got harder and faster like drums in a hard rock concert. I could barely ...

If I must go, then let me go In the gentle hush of falling snow, Kissed by winter's subtle chill, Becoming silence, soft and still. Loved that part :D . ...

Apart, we cannot last. How well can you be, If I am not there to cast your shadows? Black, without white, we cannot see I Loved that line ! I ...

I really enjoyed the poem (: I like the whole story and i like how it was about a soldier fighting for a m e r i c a :D ...

Aww, I love love love this one . Considering the fact that I never really have breakfast with my family anymore but I'd like to picture it which i was ...

Thanks for reviewing my poem (: I decided to read some of yours. I really liked this poem . Obviously better than mine ! :D You did great on this ...