So I like you

by love2write16

Published March 29, 2011

Mod: Poem was plagiarised and is now removed.

Comments & reviews · 7
writeitalldown wrote a review Review · Apr 20, 2011

Hate to be mean or rude, but this is MY POEM!!!!!!!! But I titled it "Just to Let You Know" I am VERY upset that you have STOLEN my work, in fact one of my first works!!! I am UN-following you, in fact I am reporting you, I am outraged!! Write your own poetry, with your own feelings because this is mine!!

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foreveralone
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foreveralone wrote a review Review · Mar 31, 2011

This part was my favorite :D

You smile,
at the girl behind me.
You wink, to let me know
I'm just another girl.
You wave, to force a
goodbye.
You will never shed a tear.


Your poems emotion was incredible (:

Keep Writing , Love .

- Foreveralone

Sorry about my horrible review ;D

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SillyLily
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SillyLily wrote a review Review · Mar 30, 2011

heeeyyy so like i really love the subject im SUCH a sucker for love poems and this one is so like real and raw and it reminds me of this guy i like and stuff and he like drags me around soooo much but i still like him and its just so annying but anyway i love this poem but the problem is it really has no flow to it. like theres no ryhme which like there doesnt HAVE to be a rhyme, i just like them better that way. but anyway like the way the words fit together is super important because like it doesnt rhyme and all that, so you have to make sure it all flows really well. and if you hadnt put it in the poetry section i probably would think i was reading like some sad blog post about a guy hahahahahahahahahahahaha but i like it!!!

FOLLOW ME I FOLLOW BACK!!!

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Doxie00
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Doxie00 wrote a review Review · Mar 30, 2011

WOw ! Your poem is beautiful. When i read it, it seemed to be coming from the heart...it seemed so real (that it even made me think of myself -_- ) WHat's more? REAL poetry comes from the heart...and i think yours was?... :)

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love2write16 commented Comment · Mar 30, 2011

Thanks and I certianly will keep posting I love poetry(;

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Napier commented Comment · Mar 29, 2011

Wow, this is really beautiful. :)
You. Are. Amazing. At. Poetry. Please keep writing, for the good of the world!



And then, as if written by the hand of a bad novelist, an incredible thing happened.
— Bartimaeus of Uruk