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I really like this! I think you have a really interesting plot, and you could make it even more awesome by really trying to put your readers in the shoes ...

I absolutely loveee this poem! I like how it's structured like a stream of consciousness and the flow is just so natural, like you could lose yourself in it. I ...

Hi, I really like this and I think it has some awesome moments! I really like the line when you say "nodded like I was being paid to," and I ...

This prologue is so interesting! You definitely leave me wanting to know more about the narrator's world. Just a few grammar things I noticed: maybe change it to "Here, the ...

This poem is gorgeous! I can't get over the "touching you, I feel the conglomerate..." line. I'm just a little confused on the the "hurting you is hurting me," so ...

This poem is so beautiful, even in its sadness. I think it's very well done and circles back nicely to the idea of light from beginning to end. If you ...

I think this poem is really beautiful! Maybe add a question mark after "soul" since you're asking a question. I like your line "when the ugly are beautiful," and maybe ...

Hi, I really like this poem and I think it has a lot of potential! I think you should try to incorporate more showing your emotions and not telling us ...