fireheartedkaratepup

Charlie is a pussycat and Nathaniel Bolt is a monkey/dog hybrid. That's all I have to say.

Bolt. What are you doing?

Sorry! Didn't mean to double-post.

I love this, actually. The variation intrigues me. As Kyll said, though, this isn't Old English, this is Biblical style. Try reading the original Beowulf some time. Can't read it? ...

I'm saving this forever.

Yikes! You fell into the rhyming trap, as I know Kyllorac has already explained. You say this is your first poem, so it's a great start! Everyone does the "must ...

.....where be the edit button? Anyhoot, here is the Prologue. It's not necessary for understanding; just one of those "flash to the future" things.

Working on the review, honest. I'm waiting for the words to say.

I want to squeeze this and hug it and never let it go and plaster it all over the internet so everyone can see. Also, it made me cry. Change ...

You. Sing this. Post the video on youtube. Share it with YWS. IMMEDIATELY. That is all.

AD;LAJD;LAJF;LJA;LDJFJJL; I LOVE YOU (This is not a review, because that is not a piece. :P)

This frightens me.

Aaahhh, I'll do this later. *sends memo to self* I love it, by the way.

animekaratepup wrote: Oi, Ehte! I was never notified you replied to this. XP You mind using the pretty little pm button on the side? Actually, I've never tried it. xP ...

Nooo! I liked the intro you had before. :( Watch your punctuation. You sometimes leave out commas where they should be, or put too many in-- that's really a job ...