fireheartedkaratepup

No. nononononononononononononono. *runs away from the emotions in this poem* That is to say--it's a good one.

^exactly.

.....wow. People find this amusing? That's, uh, that's molestation, and that's kinda... that's terrifying. I'm so sorry if this has actually happened to you.

I love this.

Haha don't worry about it. ^__^

xD that's okay! It's confusing when you're new. The date's in the top left corner, right under the title.

Ahaha, thanks. Next time, though, it's okay to leave pieces from two years ago alone. xD

Dude, I don't know French. xD And, um, next time there's a review day--I assume that's why you're here? It's usually better to go after the works in the Green ...

Heh, thanks for that. Fixed the typo. I'll think about what you've said about flow, but I kinda like it choppy. It's not supposed to flow, and I know I ...

Heh, it's just the disjointed style I'm going for. Not that you don't have a point, I just like it how it is. But I'll think about your criticism! ^__^ ...

ahahaha YOU ARE WELCOME. And thank YOU. ;P

Thanks. Appreciate it.

thanks, dude

The last stanza's disorganized on purpose. This is a person who is scrambling for words. They don't want to acknowledge because--well, it's painful. xD And the shielding comes from not ...

You are absolutely right and anyone who thought this was criticizing the f-bomb was projecting their feelings onto my poetry. Which is good, I guess--isn't it? That people can feel ...