fireheartedkaratepup

I see, now, why people use the line-by-line style of reviewing. It's so much easier. -_- But I hate line-by-line, so...here goes. (I feel woefully inadequate.) The beginning gave me ...

This poem reminds me of Pat Benetar's Love is a Battlefield, especially the first stanza where it describes the reactions of the mom and the dad. Then again, this dad ...

Yo! Flamingsaucybunnypup, here to review. ^_^ The halls boomed loud strikes of silence, with just the sound of the wind pushing against the rustling branches of the tree that stood ...

YO! The flaming bunny pup, here to review. :P Where open eyes Meet closed, Indistinguishable. I don't really understand this part. How can eyes meet if one set is open ...

On the title: I think there should be a comma after "Popularity". I actually agree with Stela's opinion about the "Soooo". I'm all for creative license, and I frequently draw ...

For some reason, I assumed this person was a teacher, at first. Then, as I read it again and again, I realized that maybe it was a student. Right now, ...

.........why is this a piece? I don't understand. I mean, I know you want feedback, but this is just your signature, right? Are you trying to do a style of ...

I love this! I know full well how it is to have a song stuck in your head that annoys you, and I love how you responded to that frustration! ...

Nitpicks first: The short story , “Harrison Bergeron , ” by Kurt Vonnegut , exemplifies what strong beliefs can make humans do and where this, in turn, can lead society ...

It seems somewhat contrived; there's too much focus on rhyming things. Yes, I know this is a poem, but rhyme is actually only secondary. The focus should be on the ...

Psssshhhh, don't worry so much about the punctuation in poems, duuuuudes. #reactiontoearlierreview It is important, but the line breaks convey just as much as punctuation in a poem. /endrant My ...

Great story! I really liked it. I liked peeking into the minds of the people here, the way you showed the conflict. It was a bit confusing, yes--at first I ...

About number 4.... correct me if I'm wrong, but you seem to have copied part of the "50 ways to make a girl smile" list and claimed it as your ...

I got lost a bit at the beginning, too, but the other reviewer whose name I'm not bothering to check simply because I'm lazy was wrong about the poem not ...

AASD;FLKAJDF;KLAJDS;FKJAD;KFJ;AKSDJ;FLKJA;LDJFL;AJSDLFALKSDJFL;AJSDL;FJASDKFJA;LDSJFA;KLDSJA Spazz NOT over, but I'll stop typing it out. :P So I saw you were featured and went Yay! Lumi! And meant to