Published September 24, 2011
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I loved it, it was cute. Unfortunitally, when we did Wizzard week in 4th grade and we picked from the hat for our houses... I was put in Slitherinth... -insert evil laugh here- Maybe I should write one for my house... Hehe. Great job anyway!
.........why is this a piece? I don't understand. I mean, I know you want feedback, but this is just your signature, right? Are you trying to do a style of poetry? But this is an acronym......
Honestly, I'm not sure why this is here. Shouldn't it be posted somewhere where you didn't have to pay points? Just because it's so short, and everything...
It just doesn't seem right to me.
But I love the signature! It's very creative. I should try to do that for puppies, or something--I'll have to mull it over for a long time before I decide.
and i for some reason i actually do like those things
yeah i got the idea from mikko hers is ravenclaw
I love this!
Although maybe try to change:
As some of them seem like they're just there because of what they begin with...
TEAM GRYFFINDOR!!