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Re: flip-curl literature
I....I don't know what to say. :P It's beautiful, but the wording's so unusual that I'm not sure where to nitpick, and nitpicking is uaully how I try to help ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: The Search
Do you mean make my paragraphs longer? First, it's better to reply via pm or wall post. That way, the person gets a nifty notification. Second, look at your story ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 14)
O.O My sister.....she was cutting. I hope she isn't anymore. So.... just o.o. Just o.o. Oh, and since I don't think I can top the former reviewers, here's your flame. ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Tuesday [Supernatural cover of Rebecca Black]
Gah, this is awesome. (I can't comment on the rhythm, because parodies always throw me off. :p) Great job! And I really, truly just don't care bout seeing an episode/movie ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!
Oh good gracious. That is socially O.o hilarious! (If you know what I mean.) I got another wedgie, And I can't pull it out. I bent over forwards, No I ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Sanity
Critiques first---comments later! O.o Every, single, line, ends, in, a, comma, until, you get, to line, *counts* *recounts* *loses track* *counts again* 21. So basically, everything before that is one
May 21, 2011 -
Re: The Last Dictation of the Late Grailkeeper
FINALLY!! I finally read this all the way through. Why did that take so long? It wasn't difficult! At all! *down on self* Also, D:. PEOPLE SHOULD BE REVIEWING THIS. ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Applebeans
Emotional/defensive reaction: SHUT UP. YOU SHUT UP. RIGHT NOW. I DON'T WANT TO CRY. ^ That happened right around the time he started crying because his daddy didn't notice him. ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet: In Everyday English (1.1a)
*AHEMAHEM* Plz to has response via pm? Or maybe wall. Kthnx. I don't actually like Romeo and Juliet. It's silly, and everyone dies. I don't like things where everyone dies, ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: We can, we can do this! (edited)
Oh good grief, I love this. I'm not entirely sure about the rhythm on parts of it, but I'm having a hard time matching it up to the original, since ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Part 2
It was a nice surprise to relieved the pm from you with this newest chapter. Yay! ^_^ ...I just noticed something about the subtitle thingy--there should be a comma after ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Part 1
I love this. I really, really, want to do a long, thorough, constructive review. It's what I'm used to doing, now. I like doing it. I like helping. I like ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Brokenhearted
Hmmm. This sounds like the first stanza to a longer song or poem. Heck, this could work as a chorus. Try to expand on what your feelings were when they ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: My Daddy, The General
DON'T ADD KINZEE'S COMMAS! XD Sorry, Kinzee. Anyway, maybe a few of them would be good, but adding all of them would..... take away from your style, I think. As ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Deleted for Family
Hello. I'll get straight to the point. My thoughts in a mess, Sounds a bit awkward. Maybe replace in with are? Deep in my soul, I feel dread. Dread of ...
May 12, 2011