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Re: Thorns Of Destiny - Chapter Two
Hey there ScarlettFire, Firefly here for another review! Sorry it took so long, but I'm back lol. So I don't have nearly as many nitpicks as I did in the ...
Feb 1, 2015 -
Re: Thorns Of Destiny - Chapter One
Hey there ScarlettFire, Firefly here for a review! First off I'd like to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this piece and will definitely be reading more! However, I did have ...
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: Re:Miniscence 1.1
Hey Flite, Firefly here for a review! First I would like to say, clever use of your title ;) Alright, I tend to review as I read so let's dive ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]
Hey there, Firefly here for a review! I saw you post the fourth chapter and figured I should start from the beginning, and man am I glad I did! You ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: legend one
Hey zufi, Firefly here for a review! First off, welcome to YWS! So glad you could be a part of our community here. :) Alright, on to your review! You ...
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: The Crown Thief Ch. I Pt. I (edit)
Hey there ironnovelist, Firefly here for a review! I've never really been good at introductions so I'll just jump right in. General Casimir Fox waited in distress at the short, ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: On da ship (yes thats the original title shut up)
Hey there Flamingonator, Firefly here for a review! I'm going to go ahead and dive on in by saying that you have a really good opening line. It draws the ...
Jan 11, 2015 -
Re: The Light Doesn't Shine Here (chapter two: Skudewee)
Hey Roundsquare, Firefly back for another review! (I decided to take a break from the three paragraphs of my own story that I managed to write, lol) :) Yay, Gloria's ...
Jan 10, 2015 -
Re: The Light Doesn't Shine Here (chapter one)
Hey there Roundsquare, Firefly here for a review! :) So I'll admit, mystery/suspense isn't my strong point (I'm more of a fantasy/sci-fi kind of gal) but your opening sentence caught ...
Jan 9, 2015 -
Re: The Enchantress: The Beauty in the Cold Lands
Hello elitemaster030, Firefly here for a review! First off, welcome to YWS! So glad you could join our happy family! Be sure to stop by and introduce yourself in the ...
Jan 9, 2015 -
Re: Prologue
Hey there ChaeBou55, Firefly here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! Glad you could join our fun, friendly community! Remember, the more you review the more reviews ...
Jan 9, 2015 -
Re: The Shifties: Chapter 1 - Lost
Hey there, NerdBird, Firefly in for a review! So I haven't actually been reviewing in a loooong time, but we'll see if I still got it! :wink: — (Blue words) ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Keychain Magic: Prologue & Chapter One
Hey Moonlight, Firefly here for a review! As is my usual style, I'll critique your chapter while reading through it and then address any nit-picks I have at the end, ...
Jan 30, 2012 -
Re: The Four People Nina Helped (And the One She Couldn't)- P1
Hey Jas, Firefly here for your review! As requested, I'll skip the grammar/spelling that I usually do and just give you plot and characterization. — Off-yellow words will act as ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: The Thieves' Guild (Chapters 1 & 2)
Hey InkDrop, Firefly in for the review as per request! ;) As is my usual style, I'll be combing through your piece and reviewing as I read, followed by any ...
Jan 27, 2012