figureofspeech

This would make a lovely longer story. You did a good job setting the mood here. You had a couple commas missing, no big deal: Seagulls, old enough to fly ...

This is a really good one, I believe I will like it. *Hits like*. You structured each part of the story really well. Each a little the same, a little ...

Twist ending! I like it! However, I couldn't help but notice that this story has no paragraph breaks, which is distracting. I don't know if maybe that was an accident, ...

This is a great short story! I really enjoyed it a lot. You should be proud. Did you think about the names you chose for the characters? Because the names ...

Yay, girl vs. plant fight scene! Very entertaining. Have you ever seen Little Shop of Horrors? This reminded me of it, to some degree. Maybe the characters could have used ...

Two things I couldn't help wondering: Why did she want to give blood so badly? And why couldn't she gain weight? I thought at first that she was bulimic. Comforted ...

This makes a very interesting story. I've never read anything quite like it before. However, it was very fast. Some of the fast pace of the story is good because ...

This is a very entertaining story. I loved the opening line. (Opening lines are difficult for me). Is this the beginning of a longer story? I think you could easily ...

This poem has great potential, but the story is a little hard to discern. If the story is about a girl and a boy (which I'm pretty sure it is ...

This is a good poem. It fits into your category relatively well. The one problem is that among the people who need someone to speak for them, there are no ...