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You're welcome :)

I somehow find a huge metaphor for life in everything, even if the author didn't intend it ^^ But to me it seemed almost like a commentary on society - ...

Good comment! Honestly, I liked the poem better before I added the part with the mauling, as I intended it to be a sort of ironic simile - like, for ...

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Thank you for the excellent review! You make some very good points that I'll put to use, and your rant in the beginning actually makes a lot of sense. Revision ...

No, thank YOU for ruining my childhood! :)

Thanks for taking the time to review! That was rather punny of you, actually. (Get it? Pun funny...ha...never mind.) I will definitely work on this a lot more. Thanks again ...

Thanks for the advice, it will come in handy :)

That's quite a ...creative review - it sounds like my poetry :P I guess that's the point you were trying to make, isn't it? First of all, hearing someone call ...

I appreciate the critique so much, thank you :) I will consider everything you said.

The whole poem flows beautifully now - you've created a masterpiece.

Thanks for the critique! :) You made a good suggestion - I'll consider it when I am revising this poem.

Thanks for the review! :) What do you mean about the ending, though? PS It's Falo, actually.

It is :)