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felistia

The Seven Tribes of Megalonia

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Serpent of the Sands part 1

    Thank you for the review. I am glad you liked the poem.

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: New Haven: Chapter 2: The Train of Memories

    sure. :D

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Ballpen

    Great poem. Slightly funny, but mostly excellent. I don't really have anything to nit-pick about, so I am just going to say keep up the good work. :D

    Dec 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Search for the Ruby of Fire Chapter 23

    Thank you for the review. I have fixed the problems.

    Dec 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Quest for Fire Book Two ~ Frozen Past Chapter 3

    Thank you for the review. I have fixed the mistakes.

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Quest for Fire Book Two ~ Frozen Past Chapter 3

    Thank you for the review. I have fixed the mistakes.

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Like the Back of My Hand

    Didn't I write that in the review for A Day At The Beach?

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Quest for Fire Book Two ~ Frozen Past Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review. I will take your advice and expand on the Shang Fu part.

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Autumn's Tale

    Fixed it. I would love if you could have a look now please.

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Autumn's Tale

    Thank you for the review. I have reworded it.

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Autumn's Tale

    Thanks for the review. I have taken some of the suggestions.

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Autumn's Tale

    P.s I don't even know what I am writing about. It came to me in the middle of the night and I quickly wrote it down while I was half ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Sands of Time.

    Thank you for the review. I will work on the rhythm, though I might not be able to do it, because this is mostly about the descriptions and I don't ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Autumn's Tale

    Thanks for the review. I will write some more and add it to the poem as soon as I can. I have fixed the spelling mistakes.

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Heart Of Gold

    It is definitely free of verses. :D

    Dec 3, 2015


If food is poetry, is not poetry also food?
— Joyce Carol Oates