felistia

Thanks for the review. I agree about that last line in the second stanza and I'll go back and fix that as soon as I can. :D

Thanks for the review. :D Also that bit about the little girl seeing one of the creatures, that's a good idea. I'll probably go and add that in. :D

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked. :D

Thanks for the review. :D

Thanks for the review. :D

Thanks for the review. I'll go back and fix up the poem as soon as I can. :D

Thanks so much for the review. I'll go back through and make improvements as soon as possible. :D

Thanks for the review and the help. I'll get going with the fixes as soon as I can. :D p.s I was trying to make a shape poem in the ...

Thanks for the review. I appreciate the help. :D P.s I was playing around with shape poems. This was supposed to look like a ship. :D

Thanks for another review. As before, I'll go and fix up the things you stated. Thanks again. :D P.s I'll also let you know when the next part's out. :D

Thanks again for another great review. I'll be sure to go and fix it up. :D P.s I'll send you a note when the next part is out. :D

Thanks for the review. I'll take on your criticism and apply it to the story. :D

Thanks for the review. I will defiantly go back though and clarify a few things. :D

Thank you for the review. I'll go through and have a look for the errors. As for drawing out the scene with the NightMouth, I absolutely agree and will go ...

Thanks for the review. This was part one of my story, but everything will be explained in the coming chapters. I felt that it would be more interesting to reveal ...