felistia

Thank you so much for another review. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Ruby of Fire is (wasn't that the name of one of your other books?) Yes that ...

Thank you so much for yet another review. Your input is helping tremendously. It's the sort of reviews I love to get and wait for all day. I do hope ...

Thank you so much for the review. I'll apply the tips and comments as soon as possible. On the subject of the Howler Dragons being more powerful then the Shadow ...

Thank you so much for the review. It's helps a lot. I'll take you're advice and start editing as soon as possible. I do how you'll continue reading. :D

Ah that explains a lot. Thank you that helps a lot. I'll try to cut down on the whole berating thing. Don't worry about the interaction with other characters though. ...

Thanks for the review. :D About the typos, I'll be sure to check when ever I copy over onto the publish center. (didn't know it changed stuff) Thanks so much ...

P.S could you possibly point out what you don't like about Zoltar and if you have any ideas on what might make him a better character?

Thank you so much for the review. I'll start editing the chapter right away. I've been having so much trouble with the beginning chapters 2 to 6 and it's great ...

Thank you for the review. It gave me something to think about. :D P.s All the other chapter are in the green room apart from the first chapter. :D

thanks for the review. I'll go ahead and take on your advice and apply it as soon as possible. when it comes to showing more of ever day life I ...

Thank you so much for the review. This is still a rough draft grammar and punctuation wise as I'm probably going to change it up quite a bit in the ...

Thank you so much for the review. I'll go back and make changes as soon as possible. On your question is this attached to other of my book. Yes it ...

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Thanks for the review. I'll go back and change a few things and see if I can make it a bit more grounded. :D