felistia

Thank you so much for the review. I had such fun writing these characters again. I was beginning to miss them. It's so nice having a well established back story ...

Thank you so much for the review. I did mention in the previous chapters (quite a few chapters back) that the Shadow Talons and Sea Talons had a war between ...

Thank you so much for the review. I was just about to start writing the next one when I saw that you'd posted. :D

Thank you so much for the review. They are always such a joy to read. I'll hopefully get the next chapter out soon. :D

Thank you so much for the review. :D I did change up the maze chase a bit since the last time as that creature that jumped out of the water ...

Thank you so much for the review. :D

Thank you so much for the review. I'll go back and make those grammar changes. I'm so happy you are enjoying it so far. :D

Thank you so much for the review. I always love your reviews. I'm working really hard on this draft to make the plot more sound and less like a sequence ...

Thank you so much for the review. I do agree that some parts feel jumpy. I was trying to fix those for a while before posting the chapter. They never ...

Thank you so much for the review. I agree that Zoltar did accept Hisster's opinion to quickly now that I look at it. Something to edit on the next go ...

Thank you so much for the review. This chapter was quite difficult to write. I was planning on adding more to it in the shape of his thoughts later on, ...

Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad that you're excited to see how the plot will develop. I hope the coming chapters will grow that feeling even more. ...

Thank you so much for the review. I'm so happy to add a new character to the mix. I was never quite happy with how Krakatoa sent a shadow talon ...

Thank you so much for the review. :D Yes. Things are much more complex this time around. I'm still going to keep the base story line from the previous draft, ...

Thank you so much for the review. :D