felistia

Thank you so much for another review. I'm going to go back and edit the other chapters when I can, but so far thankfully there's no reason to entirely rewrite ...

Thank you for another review. I can see I'm going to have to do quite a bit of editing once I go back over this draft. :D

Thank you for another review. :D

Thank you for all the reviews. :D As for you question in this it is a good point about how Zoltar is a male and the Wisp Talon is a ...

Thank you so much for another review. Glad you liked the chapter. :D

Thank you so much for your review. It's great to see how the chapter appeared to you as you read through it. It helps me understand how to write better. ...

Thank you again for the review. Sorry it's so short. I've had to cut down the length of my chapters due to not enough writing time now that I'm back ...

Thank you so much for another great review. :D

Thank you again. :D

Thanks again for another in depth review. So many thoughts going through my head now. It's great to see the story through someone else's eyes. Gives a whole new perspective ...

Thank you again for another review. They're really helpful. I'm so glad that you're liking the story so far. Unfortunately the number of chapter I'm releasing might slow down to ...

Thank you so much for a review. :D

Thank you so much for your in depth review. You've brought out a lot of points that will be good to go back and look at when I rewrite the ...

Thank you so much for another review. I'm glad you like the chapter. Felistia was a little flirty, but that's just part of her character.

Thank you so much for the review. I agree with everything you've said. I'll have to change these things in the next draft after I've finished this one.