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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: all of me squeezed out in pieces

    This is a very emotive piece of poetry, and that certainly comes through in your writing. I love the layout of your poem, especially the "I am still going" phrases, ...

    Apr 30, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: “you’re my world.”

    This poem gives me the imagery of a hopeless romantic, someone who guides more with their heart rather than their head (how I can relate to this :) A very ...

    Oct 4, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Literature Re: You Need to Read This.

    The title was eye-catching and bold, forcing me to read this piece and I not at all disappointed with this piece, although reading this genre is far from my normal ...

    Oct 4, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: acceptance

    Hey Nateherndon, I completely agree with you. The world needs to be more open-minded and more accepting of others. Society today has come a long way to get to where ...

    Oct 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Waiting

    I really like how you left the interpretation up to the reader for this poem, as you have included just enough context but not too much, that the imagination has ...

    Oct 4, 2019


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality