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Re: Letters from Ayla
hey there, i'm just stopping by for a quick review. This was a cool story to read. I am always super intrigued when getting the opportunity to read things in ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: My Love Poem
hey there, just dropping by for a quick review. i loved reading your poem. I loved the theme you kept throughout the poem of cosmic metaphors. Like what Snoink said ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: Merry-Go-Round of Life
hey there, i thought i'd drop by for a quick review. i really enjoyed reading this story. it seems to be about a man who is sitting in the outskirts ...
Feb 12, 2024 -
Re: Sunrise Setting over my Bed
hey there, thought i'd leave a quick review-- this is the first thing i think i've reviewed on here that featured multiple collaborators, and i just think that's super cool. ...
Feb 4, 2024 -
Re: Protect Him
hey there, i just thought i'd leave a quick review. i really loved reading this. it felt like the second or third chapter into a novel. you do a great ...
Feb 4, 2024 -
Re: when my mother stabbed me
hey there, thought i'd leave a review. once again, huge fan of the poem. in one of my classes we're talking about metaphors, and i really love that the entirety ...
Jan 27, 2024 -
Re: Uh Oh! It's 2 am!
hey there, i'm just here to leave a quick review. overall, i really enjoyed reading this poem. it's about what goes through someone's head as they're trying to fall asleep. ...
Jan 27, 2024 -
Re: As long as I have this
hey there, i thought i'd leave a quick review for this poem. i love that this poem is written in the form of a conversation: the first three stanzas being ...
Jan 2, 2024 -
Re: Hair Always Grows Back
hey there friend, i thought i'd leave a quick review for this piece. i actually wrote about something sort of similar for the intro to a piece back in september. ...
Jan 2, 2024 -
Re: She Was A Child
hey again, i thought i'd leave you a quick review. this poem hurts. it's like a letter from a daughter to her mother, her mother who did not do her ...
Dec 27, 2023 -
Re: Circus for One
hey there, i thought i would leave a quick review for this poem :) first off, right off the bat i had to look up what a calliope was. i ...
Dec 10, 2023 -
Re: I am the Leaf
hey there, i thought i'd leave a short review for this poem :). Like what Cozmo said, i also thought this was going to be a happier poem. i didn't ...
Dec 10, 2023 -
Re: Eternal Life, Ancient Greece, and Other Mundane Things
hey there! thought I'd leave a quick comment. Can I just say, right away, that the way this is written is incredible? The words, the buildup, the visualization, everything about ...
Nov 17, 2023 -
Re: An Evening Kiss
hey there, i thought i'd leave a quick review. This poem seems to be about the narrator observing a sunset. I love the wording of this poem. Your use of ...
Nov 17, 2023 -
Re: Listen or turn away..
hey there, thought I'd leave a quick review of this piece. I found this piece pretty moving. The mood and the visuals that are created through your choice of language ...
Oct 20, 2023
