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  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Letters from Ayla

    hey there, i'm just stopping by for a quick review. This was a cool story to read. I am always super intrigued when getting the opportunity to read things in ...

    Feb 22, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: My Love Poem

    hey there, just dropping by for a quick review. i loved reading your poem. I loved the theme you kept throughout the poem of cosmic metaphors. Like what Snoink said ...

    Feb 22, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Merry-Go-Round of Life

    hey there, i thought i'd drop by for a quick review. i really enjoyed reading this story. it seems to be about a man who is sitting in the outskirts ...

    Feb 12, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sunrise Setting over my Bed

    hey there, thought i'd leave a quick review-- this is the first thing i think i've reviewed on here that featured multiple collaborators, and i just think that's super cool. ...

    Feb 4, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Protect Him

    hey there, i just thought i'd leave a quick review. i really loved reading this. it felt like the second or third chapter into a novel. you do a great ...

    Feb 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: when my mother stabbed me

    hey there, thought i'd leave a review. once again, huge fan of the poem. in one of my classes we're talking about metaphors, and i really love that the entirety ...

    Jan 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Uh Oh! It's 2 am!

    hey there, i'm just here to leave a quick review. overall, i really enjoyed reading this poem. it's about what goes through someone's head as they're trying to fall asleep. ...

    Jan 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: As long as I have this

    hey there, i thought i'd leave a quick review for this poem. i love that this poem is written in the form of a conversation: the first three stanzas being ...

    Jan 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Hair Always Grows Back

    hey there friend, i thought i'd leave a quick review for this piece. i actually wrote about something sort of similar for the intro to a piece back in september. ...

    Jan 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: She Was A Child

    hey again, i thought i'd leave you a quick review. this poem hurts. it's like a letter from a daughter to her mother, her mother who did not do her ...

    Dec 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Circus for One

    hey there, i thought i would leave a quick review for this poem :) first off, right off the bat i had to look up what a calliope was. i ...

    Dec 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I am the Leaf

    hey there, i thought i'd leave a short review for this poem :). Like what Cozmo said, i also thought this was going to be a happier poem. i didn't ...

    Dec 10, 2023
  • Other » General, General Re: Eternal Life, Ancient Greece, and Other Mundane Things

    hey there! thought I'd leave a quick comment. Can I just say, right away, that the way this is written is incredible? The words, the buildup, the visualization, everything about ...

    Nov 17, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: An Evening Kiss

    hey there, i thought i'd leave a quick review. This poem seems to be about the narrator observing a sunset. I love the wording of this poem. Your use of ...

    Nov 17, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Listen or turn away..

    hey there, thought I'd leave a quick review of this piece. I found this piece pretty moving. The mood and the visuals that are created through your choice of language ...

    Oct 20, 2023


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