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Re: Celestial movement
It is a very nice poem. I like the descriptions. Descriptions are one of the things I like. I read the poem out loud and it soundede nice. It was ...
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Re: Our Amazing World
Yep. We live in a world of wonder. It is a really nice poem. You really summed up what each continent has. The rhyming was good. Some parts of it ...
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Re: Mother Earth
It is a positive story, but it needs some work. Some words do not rhyme, but do not worry, it can always be fixed! :) I think the majority of ...
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Re: Cyberbullies
What a positive message! It is a nice poem. In one part, however, you wrote "dose" when it is supposed to be "does". There is a grammatical error. "She is ...
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Re: Don't Let It Out
This is a story full of suspense. You just want to read it. This would make a good suspense novel. It is fast and quick-paced. Normally, you do not add ...
Apr 19, 2015 -
Re: Cassander
This was a very nice story! I like Greek mythology and this story really does it. It is very interesting. I only found one grammatical error. "Sat on it, beside ...
Apr 19, 2015