fallenoutofgrace

Thanks for the help I wouldn't have caught the problem in formats

sorry forgot I was on my sister's account

Thanks for the review. As for the dynamics the princess is afraid to disobey her father so she dose what he asked. I wanted this poem to show dephts, its ...

Thanks and ikr I much rather a dark theme than a happily ever after one :)

That was one of the dephts I was inferring. Thanks for the review.

im confused what was wrong with that sentence?

thanks it means a lot :)

Sure all be glad to explain to you. I wanted this to be different than most poem you would ever read. and the beginning if you watch a child run ...

Yes and im so sorry, before revire day I edited this fixing all the grammar errors and found out that the changes didn't go through. All be editing this by ...

Whoa never knew about that :) and thanks it means a lot to hear you liked this.

Thanks for the help.

I'm confused was this a miscarriage poem or a termnation pregnacy poem? Either way good poem, intense emotions you shared well done, keep writing.

Sorry wasnt useto someone calling a cartoon a film

Thanks your thoughts mean a lot :)