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Yea definitnly needed to re-do and edit. As the obsession I wanted to show him I would guess loosing it for a moment, he needed to know who he killed. ...

Yea thank you for the critics it really helped me, I tried adding those two bits to show of the mother moving on to try to make it a bit ...

Thanks :3

There is alot of meaning to the question the meaning of life and to this work as well, you leave the reader in a more thoughtful existence trying to deciphering ...

This is incredible it flows together and gives off that ( i know im saying this wrong) that rebellious spark that makes you want to change the world right now. ...

thanks, yea i did the overdone word cause A, tried to write it as a little kid and B didn't know how else to phrase it

all be glad to :)

I need to say this before I go bad to the emotionless reviewer. First off, Don't just don't call it pathetic for the reasons, for some of these women there ...

Yes the second is by the child, and the last stanza is a few years difference

As for the inspiration, I had a dream.

To be quiet honest, I had two versions of the orignal and posted both. As for the choppiness of the sentences I did this because if you've ever been through ...

If you please excuse me i must now die from laughter. This was amazing and humorous at the same time. If werewolves have therapist you would make a great doc

thanks im sorry I made you cry.

Thanks you helped me alot :D

Thanks it means alot that you liked it and no worries im just glad you read it :3 as for the how, there was a complication during the third trimester, ...