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fallenoutofgrace

fallenoutofgrace

  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Would you like an apple pie with that?

    I agree with Brittnaynicolewhen she says" This is interesting. Like, my family eats at MD's alot because its cheap, you know? But it's obviously very unhealthy. I like how you ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Other » Spiritual, General Re: strangers

    first off This is amazing because this is exactly what happens whenever you look at another person. Where you actually see them as someone else its very well done. I ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Happy Clap

    First off i agree with what blackbunny1998 had to say " Hey, you! Yeah, you! I'm here to write a review from this poem! So to start off...damn, dat poem ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Marrilian: Chapter 1 part 3

    Hello there weary traveler I am fallen here to review you. Now first off I enjoyed your diction and description of everything it was really well. I liked how you ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Eight

    First off, omg omg the way you ended this had me like O.O dang that just happen must read more! The way you did this story so flawlessly was quite ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: untitled

    Hey there fallen here First off I loved this poem because you don't see many long love poems like this Such as I do after all. One nick pick is ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Eyes of Hooks

    Hello there fallen here so lets get started. First off I enjoyed your poem because it is relatable to a person wanting to snatch up all knowledge and all images ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning in Air

    Hello there it is fallen to review you tonight, So shall we get started with a sorta of rant of amazement? Alright I enjoyed your poem because it was not ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forever Spoken

    Hello fallen here reviewing you tonight, So lets get started first off time for a rant of my pure excitement. First off I Loved your idea and how you inplanted ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Meh, Whatever

    Alright fallen reviewing here so let's get started. I completely love your adventure genre warlocks and mid-evil stuff is my Achilles heel. Now let's get started on your style shall ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: "Smile, darling, smile."

    Hi this is fallen here to review First off I completely agree with megustapastel " Hi, I actually love this. I can definitely relate to this in a personal level, ...

    Mar 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Sticks and Stones May Break My Bones

    Hey this is fallen here reviewing your poem :3 lets get started. First off your absolutely right in that words hurt just as much as words you nailed your thoughts ...

    Mar 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Words

    I agree with QuietQuilla " like the subtle anger in this write. ( subtle doesn't look right, but I looked it up and supposedly it is!! Who would've though it'd ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Damn, December again

    LOVE this poem because it's so true. It's like you took the experience of sadness and a break up or crushing on a girl/guy and finding them with someone else ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Lyrics » Humor, Lyrical Re: Three Blind Mice. (A Parody.)

    Short sweet and amazing well done :3 I do agree with what iggy said " How exactly do they die? Death by chocolate? What is in the shake? Arsenic? Don't ...

    Mar 20, 2014


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