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  • Other » Realistic, Romantic Re: Crush

    I generally avoid commenting on writing like this as it is so personal I don't think I have the right to. But this hit me so hard I thought I'd ...

    Mar 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: Not the Same

    Hi! I always find reviewing poetry quite difficult. I think what may be an excellent poem to one person can be total rubbish to another. I also think that poetry ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: HM

    Wow! Though it was dark and packed with mystery and suspense I really liked it! You have a great talent and, though I'm not supposed to, I feel drawn to ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Health Re: Student-Depression; Should it be taken seriously?

    Hi! I think I will start by telling you that I had severe anxiety and depression when I was 13/14. I had an illness, chronic daily headache, which is quite ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: St Victoria's Part 1

    Hi! I must apologise as I am horribly lazy and have not read all of this. I will, I promise but I don't have time to today. I have only, ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Sleep Well (chapter 1)

    Hi! I have to say this is somewhat unusual and I hope you can clear this up for me. My understanding, from your description, is that this is fanfiction on ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Other » Culture, Realistic Re: It's all So... Depressing

    Wow. They were some powerful words! You definitely have a point, I'll say that much! Not only on here but in general people tend to write about death, myself included! ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Realistic Re: Just Another Statistic..

    A great piece of writing! I definitely agree with the points your making here. I once saw a similar film of a group of teenage girls involved in a texting ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A Joy or a Pest, Who's Your Roommate?

    First things first, I love your writing style! Sometimes in English exams they ask you to write a "lively" essay or article. Personally, I've always wondered what they meant by ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: A Lover's Revenge (Title Pending) Chapter 1

    Wow, that was darker than I was expecting! Not that I have a problem with that, of course. In fact it's one of my favourite things to read. I'm not ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Play!

    I really like this poem. I find it very thought provoking. I love acting and so when I read this it really did make me think about life and if ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Last Moments

    Oh my gosh! That's so heartbreakingly sad! Are you trying to depress everyone who reads this? Aside from the fact it's so dreadfully sad, it's a really good piece of ...

    Mar 4, 2014


Who's the more foolish, the fool, or the fool who follows him?
— Obi-Wan Kenobi