fairyreader

This is AMAZING! I really, really enjoyed this story! I can wait to read more! Please post on my wall when you've uploaded! Thanks! x

i love this, aboustly amazing!

Is it sad that I teared up while reading this? I adored this and its refresing to read a story with God in it :) Since I'm a christain. This ...

This was amazing! I loved how you gave the angel of death a beautiful charcter. I enjoyed this story and the only thing you could improve is near the end ...

Oh my word! This was so cute! I adored it so much! I dnt have any feedback. You've done so well and I really enjoyed this. If this is just ...

This is so cute! I love the song 'use sombody'. So I decided I had to cheack out this poem even though its not my genre. I loved the imagery ...

Hey! So I only got 1/3 into the story till I gave up cause I'm lazy ahah! So here's my review: Firstly, you're story is far too long. Chop it ...

Hey! Please put you're story on here and not just pug a link. This website gives excellant feedback compared to wattpad (and I have a wattpad account). I look forward ...

Are you REALLY only 13?! Well... dang. I'm only 15 and I dont think I would be ever able to turn a somewhat inncoent princess into a girl pleading for ...

Hey, you should change the genre from teen fiction/romance to romance/horror. I did enjoy the uniqueness of this story. It was a massive plot twist IN THE FIRST CHAPTER! Ahah ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this. A few tips: Maybe get rid of the vortex picture and picture of the outfit she was orginally wearing cause its kinda distracting and just ...

Dont use slang so far in your story you've said 'tbh' and 'i.e' and it's just confusing and dosent fit. Sorry, i'm doing this as I go along. I hope ...

I'm just going to start off by saying this: 1)You need to spell cheack and use a comma in places it needs to be used. 2)Breack this story into chapters ...

Wow. I LOVED this! I love the sass of the charcter and how you ended it. Few things I want to point out: 1) Near the top when you introduce ...

Hey, I really loved this. One thing you should change is when you say 'undenably unbleavable and anything but transparent'. You should change it to 'Undeniable, unblelivavle and anything transport' ...