fairygirl

Just a couple questions: 1)Why does Justin need a wheelchair? 2)they're going to collegae, so how old does that make them? (i'm a dork for not knowing, but hey! maybe ...

Very suspenseful, great job on the details! I'm glad Luke is still alive! This is a fun and exciting read and Luke is definately somekind of hero. I only wish ...

Wow, great job!! This was excellant! and your details were fabulous! this is a fun read and it keeps me guessing!! This sounds like an adventure as well as a ...

Wow, good job! This was a suspenseful read! I enjoyed it very much. just a few little pointers: again, details. When they crashed, was there a sickening knot in her ...

This was...interesting. Unfortunetly, it wasn't very much fun to read. It was hard to understand, a little confusing, and boring. I felt no attachment towards the writing and the characters ...

fallenangel, thank you for suggesting this! I love it. (of course, you HAD to add Beauty and the Best...;D) This was really cute and fun to read. The humor and ...

This was really fun to read! Your characters were great and their relationship is really sweet. But there were places where I was just a little confused: 1)Why are they ...

Great job! I had a fun time reading what you had written. I'm no grammatical genius, thus, I'm not going to say anything about mistakes, mainly because I didn't see ...

This was great! I'm excited to see what happens next. I wonder what really happened in the alley way, and who it was that hurt her. I'm glad Jared found ...

To put it short, I loved it! This was really good, and the peom made my heart clench and unclench for a bit. I'm not going to say something like ...

Hiya! Ok, great job! this was really an eye catcher! I had fun reading it and I'm excited for the next chapter. 1) i hate myself for saying this, since ...

This was really good! I'm excited for the next chapter. Great job on Brandon: his quick recognition was a little surpising, as was the narrators anger. I'm sure theres a ...

I agree with mhmmcolleenxO. It took me a second to realize that he was only 11 years old. But other than that, this really hit home. It was great. I ...

This is good! You pulled it off extremly well, but I'm a little confused. 1)Maybe if your included the narrators name a little more often-I'm not sure what it is. ...

Thornfox: I've read this,over on goodreads. and if you remember, I told you to hurry up and get the next chapter!!! I love it, but was wondering: 1)what does Fox ...