fairygirl

haha, coolio! I've never ehard the real song but your lyrics are totally true. Bella's such an air head. Jacob's cute. I'm not a big fan of Twilight but i ...

Hiya! I REALLY liked this story! :) you did a fantastic job. I'm not even going to try to think that I saw any grammatical errors cuz I couldn't see ...

Cute story, good moral! :) Just watch out for the little things: I hadn't eaten much of anything today and I was starving. try:... as I hadn't eaten much of ...

Ohh, cool story!!! Bits and peices are a little confusing. After her paretns leave her with her grandma, does she fall asleep? Where does she wake up? Did it switch ...

OHH!!! This is shiney! :) Keep writing! I like this story alot. You have amazing details and I'm no grammer queen, so if there are any mistakes, you won't hear ...

Hey, cool story! You've really got me hooked on it! I love yoru characters, but Mel seems a little too perfect. If I was 17 with hello kitty blankets, I ...

Hm, intersting story. I'm still a little confused, but its the first chapter! I love stories that unfold. makes them less predicatble and much more fun to read. Ehh, I ...

Heres my thing: It doesn't matter if its 'just another idea'. It's still an idea. And people might not love it, but who cares?!If you love to write, which I'm ...

Hiya! Good job and great detail, I liked it alot. I'm still trying to work out your characters, but this is shaping out to be a good story. Now, I'm ...

Sad story! I can't imagine a life without my mom. Just a couple things: -add more deatils. what does her father look like? Is she mad at him for not ...

WOW!! This is fantastic! You kept me glued to the computer! I'll be reading more of your work, thats for sure! I have no advise, no suggestions, and no ideas. ...

wow, sad. You've got a great talent. There's alot of truth in this poem (and though I know absolutely nothing about falling in love, cause I'm only 14, I really ...

... Lol!!!! XD funny, you should add more about the ball and stuff. with your humor, I'll laugh all through it! :P Keep writing, no matter what!! Peace! ~*~fairygirl~*~

Ahhh, that is soooooo sad! and sweet too. Bitter sweet. I am most definately NOT going to even try to point out and gramatical errors, if there are any. I ...

cool. I'm over here wondering how this is gonna turn out. Keep at it! !) add a little more detail on the human characters (unless you plan on having them ...