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Awww thank you!!! :) I'm so glad you got that, it was the idea! I wanted to capture all the different aspects of the beginning of a relationship; the shy ...

Thank you so so much! Unfortunately since I edited it the bolder font is gone Dx But it's there nonetheless :D Gosh, that is such a great compliment, I'm so ...

Than you so much for the review! I made some changes, your suggestions were extremely helpful!! So sorry it took so long to respond, life has been busy!! I'd love ...

ASDFGHJKL thanks! I love John Green, I haven't read the book yet but my gf says I'm the Hazel to her Augustus

Hi!! Thank you so much for the review!! It wasn't supposed to come out like that, the way it uploaded I think it was the wrong file... Anywho, I'm going ...

Awwwwwww!!! Thank you so much :33

I wouldn't have put a rating on it, but you hsve to be careful when it's about suicide (so yes, it is about someone slitting their wrists). Well it should ...

Hey! :) Thank you so much. I really appreciate the criticism. On the 'no control repetitions, some of it was errors when copy/pasting onto here, I kind of messed up ...

Hello? I love you. xD

THank you so much! That's really nice. I'm really glad you felt that way about it. Puerto Rico is a beeeeeeautiful place! thank you again for the review! ! :D

@ Jasmine Hart : Thanks so much! I worked real hard on it. ;) The reason that stanzas six and seven don't match is because this was for a class ...

@Writingneon: Thanks lots! :) I know the last line's a bit iffy but Like I said, I wrote in a short amount of time and hindered was the only word ...

Thank you, Zuzu. Of course I expected you to eventually give in and marvel at the very ground I walk on...Yes, I started to get a bit impatient at first ...

Thank you so so much! Yes, I am only 13 but so are you! LOL (sorry 2:00 makes me weird...) Awwwww...*special moment* I spent that night staring at the Google ...

Thank you for the reviews (and sorry for the late reply!). I know it might be a little confusing in some (if not many :D ) parts but that is ...