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evairo

  • Poetry » General, General Re: sparks

    I was amazed at the subject matter you chose for this piece. I never would have thought a light bulb could produce such amazing poetry-I mean you obviously produced it ...

    Feb 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Leaving behind the facts.

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this poem. The format was unlike any I've ever read. I especially liked the ending of this piece. The events led up to it nicely, ...

    Feb 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: My Darling Gone...

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    Hi! I saw that you just commented on my poem and then I stumbled upon this. First off, this was extremely beautiful. It harbored a lot of depth and emotion. ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: My Darling Gone...

    Hi! I saw that you just commented on my poem and then I stumbled upon this. First off, this was extremely beautiful. It harbored a lot of depth and emotion. ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: World Peace

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading your poem. I think the concept of world peace is very appealing, although whenever I think in depth about it I can always find errors. ...

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: If I Killed Myself Tonight

    This piece was really well written. I, for one, was able to relate to it a lot and I'm sure many other people will be able to as well. My ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Love Song

    This is such a cute little song! The only part I would consider revising is "You are better than everything." This might only be me, but I feel like this ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: She flows one last time

    Hi! This is my first review so bear with me. First off, I really enjoyed this poem. I found it exciting and very well written. The only part that confused ...

    Feb 1, 2015


What will live longer, you or your words? Something to think about the next time you abandon a project...
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