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ethanswish

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Alone

    I'm glad you did. Powerful. It makes my skull numb with all of the repetetive happy go lucky poems that I see everywhere, with what seems like it's been given ...

    Sep 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'll Lie

    wow. epic. My hairs were standing on end throughout every verse, I hung onto every word. It reminds me a little bit of the system of a down song lost ...

    Sep 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Invisible

    hahaa, this made me smile :] well fucking done! ^^ the f word is powerful, but you can't abuse it and you haven't. It conveys emotion more than most other ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Removed

    A lot of shuffling later and something I like! I agree on the haunting tone, it's dark but in the oh so right way. The way you've written it as ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sonnet of the Storm

    The rythm and pace of this piece is great :D it's dramatic and capturing, and just flows of your tongue, it's really beautiful :] very powerful indeed! You've really captured ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: drunk on the stars

    :] wowww!! I've been looking through and couldn't find anything I could relate to enough to review but this actually distracted me from predator! I love the way you've written ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Life after death is like love before sex.

    What genre of music were these lyrics written for? The integrity of the lyrics is something to be proud of, constantly strong imagery and an overall firm rhythm. I love ...

    Feb 18, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The Smoker's Sea Song

    Wawww, I like. I love how you use real words, most of the lyrics you hear nowadays don't have words with over three syllables so that idiots don't get hemerages ...

    Feb 18, 2010


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— Chinese saying