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Thanks guys, your reviews are a great help!!

Thank you for the reviews everyone, they are all quite helpful and I am working on the poem so keep checking in for the edited version soon. Monument Soul I ...

I tried to put a few changes in the second and third verses so please read and tell me what you think thank you for the reviews and feel free ...

thank you guys for the criticism will do some work on it.

sweet, sweet, sweet...thats all i can say 'Bubbly and trusting, as most five year olds are. If you need me, I'll come, no matter how far.' couldnt ask for a ...

i think i am one of those who control their own luck, although lately i have been on a streak of bad luck that i begin to think i dont ...

Your poem is very sweet and endearing, although it lacks punctuation throughout. Apart from the punctuation, the poem seems really natural and that i think, is a good thing since ...

thank you guys for your reviews and Chirantha I have tried to put the changes you suggested...

hi i really like your style though there are parts of your poem i did not understand especially the beginning.