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i really liked this it was up beat and it was able to hold my attention for the whole time so yea i liked this a lot. :D

this was okay since it was for an english kind of thing but if it is for other purposes it would be consider rather boring in my terms that is.

Hey guys thank so much for the ideas oh and answer your question this type story does need prologue I needed to kinda be able to pull some ideas out ...

wow wow wow what more can be said it was really great and I could not find anything wrong with it so great job. :D

okay that was kinda funny at the begining but It was kinda weired at the same time. I agree with Meep on this. but it was okay I guess.....but it ...

yes this was very good I loved the way you wrote it so keep it up.

yes this was very good I enjoyed reading it and loved the descriptions and how you used butterflys in it very cute :D keep it up

yeah this seems right and I will sign your guestbook so it won't be so empty :D

hey this was ok but I really did not get it and I had to read it over and over just to understand it but it was ok.

this was very good it did kinda make me sad but it was very good job well done keep it up.

yeah this was actually very good I really liked this and I did not see anything wrong with it.

hey this was pretty good but you had a few cap. errors like you needed to be You cause its at the begining of the line. but other than that ...

yes I agree with them this really did seem like a list. also you had way to many Mr. Rights and He Woulds. so yeah you should read up on ...

hey this was very good i did not want this to end. you were able to keep me hooked from beginning to end so keep it up. And i could ...

hey this was good and i agree with Claudette but anyways it was good and I could not find anything else wrong with it. so keep it up. :D