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Not sure what it is

by PirateQueen


I saw some else write a haiku and was wonder if this is correct.

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Thu Mar 15, 2007 5:47 pm
BlackDove wrote a review...



Yep! That's right. 17 syllables makes a haiku. I used to write haiku's about butterflies. :lol: I'll sign your guest book.

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Thu Mar 15, 2007 12:35 am
erin says...



yeah
this seems right and I will sign your guestbook so it won't be so empty :D




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Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:49 pm
PirateQueen says...



hehe yes i meant pen not pin oops

#Queen of the Pirates#




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Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:48 pm
Goldenheart says...



Hee hee!

Yes, I believe that's right! I do wonder, though... did you mean 'pen' instead of 'pin'?

Goldie





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