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Fortis, my old friend! Good evening, and happy Thousand Works Day! Haha, just kidding, but it feels like the main idea of the poem, and you really look like you've ...

Gelie24, hello! Wisegirl22 likes to review, with 4,089 points and all The rhyme scheme. Funny thing for poems, eh? I noticed it changed within these lines: "I pinch and punch ...

Romania, hello! If you're still a little confused, let me know, and I'll help you! There was only one nitpick, it was minor, even for a nitpick. Look, "it" is ...

Baesch, nice to meet you! You've gotta' meet some of my friends, especially writer88. They're AWSUM. First off, I defined sluice, and noticed that it meant flow smoothly, or a ...

Wtppowers, I think we've met, if you don't remember, pretend you never saw me and then I am WISEGIRL22 THE AWESOME AND ULTIMATE. I really liked this, it was short ...

Pinkieishere1345, hello! I would follow you if you followed me... :D In the first line, you shouldn't just leave it like that, put an "a" after "am". "Many people think ...

Hello, RavenMoonStone! Nice to see my old follow friend! Okay, you normally don't say things repeated in 16+ poems. Maybe do: "Ignore the noise." "Ignore, ignore." The ending was a ...

BiscuitsBatchAvoy, hello again! I see my old friend has been busy. :P In the beginning, you say this sentence with dashes/hyphens. You don't need those, just commas are fine. And ...

IamTraunt, nice to see you! I noticed that some small error(s) took place. No space after the ellipsis, and no capitalization, either. "Is... Uh, is that your favourite book, or ...

Hi! Wise here to review! The first thing that caught my eye was the fact that "tv" is lowercase. It should be capitalized. "I'm an ordinary tv reporter..." And the ...

Brian, hullo! Nice to meet you, wisegirl22 is definitely a good reviewer. Tell Nate hi. The first thing I noted was this. I think you should quotation marks before this ...

Sarahjo, nice seeing you again! I have a(n) (few) error(s). "I wondered the most was, Who is Rose?" When you start typing in italics, you shouldn't capitalize the first letter. ...

Donizback, I've met you before yet not too much on this site have I seen you. If you don't remember me... WISEGIRL22 IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!, So, the first thing my sharp ...

Ell15, nice to meet ya'! I am wisegirl22, grand reviewer. So, I didn't have any nitpicks or errors of any sort because this was so fluently written. I love these ...

Alevine, heya! Wise here to review. I like this little piece you wrote, it kind of strayed from the point during some times, and I wonder why it's all bold, ...