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I loved these books. I really wasn't that fond of the story-- it upset me that so few people had even an inkling of common sense. But Lemony Snicket's storytelling ...

I like the way they speak now; it think it's exquisite. Good description is all well and fine; so it good narrative. But good dialogue is something so rare and ...

The Martian Chronicles- Ray Bradbury ***** (really, really good collection of short stories. Best short stories I've ever read.) Slaughterhouse Five- Kurt Vonnegut**** Picture of Dorian Gray- Oscar Wi

Hello Forest Queen, I didn't see any nitpicks. I would ask why Lilly is spelled with two l's but I'm sure you have your reasons. The problem I have with ...

This was a beautiful piece. I am surprised that two people died at your school, and I'm very sorry for your friend Emily. But your story was well-written and really ...

I'm going to be perfectly honest, I didn't like it. I guess it just wasn't for me, so this won't help you very much except to tell you the thoughts ...

I agree with the kitten claws above me. I've read far too many great and poor books to mistake Stephenie Meyer as anything but a mediocre writer in the romance ...

I thought this piece was excellent. I guess I'll start backwards, since the end is what's freshest in my mind... it always seems that women will give away their name ...

I sort of do, sort of don't agree with Karsten. You did use repetition a lot, and It is slightly over-the-top, but I can understand that, if you whittle this ...

This was a pretty great piece, it feels a bit transitional, like a chapter between chapters but its lets us know a little bit more about Aurora and Leighton's other ...

Everyone else has done such lengthy, informative posts that I almost felt like my two cents would go without recognition. But I'll say something anyways, because I deeply enjoyed the ...

I don't know how to begin a review. Do I celebrate being the first one, do I say that I liked it, do I jump into the harsher part of ...

Okay, so here goes. I agree with the person above me about this passage. Elise patted her on the back and asked her to help set out the sandwiches. Mary ...

True to my strange nature, I'm going to disagree with everyone above me who mentioned the quote “I love you.” I understood what it meant, and it made me smile ...

Ahh, this is so overdue. And due to my incredible slowness/ complete ignorance for the star wars and clone wars movies ( I watched them but... i dont know, I'm ...