empressoftheuniverse

The last handful of sentences were so magnificent that by the end, I was completely in love. The beginning was a little slow, however, and I had some trouble staying ...

Prologue Lightning struck the west wind fire and I could not tame myself enough to step out into it. I watched the building where my former home had once lay? ...

I tried to review this before but my computer decided to vomit on everything I love and delete my comment. However, I agree with Twit completely. Your main character needs ...

Hello Gracy, thanks for the follow. Mostly I agree with Blink-- I think that you need to dig a little deeper in regards to emotion and try to bring some ...

You are a prolific poet. Unless you just have about nine hundred poems lying around in your computer; it just boggles my mind how you can write quality rhyming poetry ...

Instead of just a boring old review I'm going to give some of these characters faces. The devil, of course: Not in all white but since it's Clive Owens I ...

So I did actually man up and read your story, at least the first part. First of all, let me say that I love satire. I love when people are ...

When your computer deletes everything you just typed.... eternal pain. But it's all ok because I just read this lovely poem while listening to Johnny Cash and the two went ...

Hello, I feel like this poem is a little schizophrenic. I love what you're doing with the metaphors but if you kept it with one theme, either biblical or Greek-themed, ...

It stands, merely a shadow, a shell, Of the legend it once was I think these two lines would be omitted. But so you don't just think I'm bossing you, ...

My computer keeps having seizures I have literally reviewed this like eight times I am spitting anger right now. Ugh let me try again To bad mouth this place or ...

I really like this poem, it it really true to your emotions without being overly personal. The first part was beautiful, simple and true. It doesn't start getting cliched until ...

Hi. Let me say first off that I love how well you pulled off the rhymes in this poem and I love the idea you wrote about. The first two ...

- whispering sound - & (I feel like I should know this) At the very least, I can say I learned a few things while reading this poem. I have ...

Hello again, This was a very cute story, especially as a new twist on a slightly tired idea. I have a few issues that are small but general. Dear Beautiful ...