emotionally(un)stable

Strangling in white sheets I think that by making the sheets white you're symbolizing innocence, which gives the speaker a personality, and you feel for him or her.That line was ...

I really like the imagery this creats, but also how vague it is. I guess you had a specific message in mid when you wrote it, but it could mean ...

This was really well written and relatable. It seemed like you were talking to the reader instead of just writing the poem. The only thing is maybe add some more ...

I have the power to open it, but in opening that door, another will close, and if that door closes, I will lose the ones behind it. I like the ...

When you said it was a sappy poem i was like ohh great but after I read it, it really ddin't seem to be that way at all. It seemed ...

Oh my, It's a poem! Its a good poem! There's lots of emotions in it. I wuv the rhyme scheme! Hehe it almost seems kind of evil with the whole ...

I see the message you are trying to show here as I think we all do but it's very strong becayse you are lacking imagry I think if you had ...

I thought this poem was very well thought out and portrayed the depth of death without being too sad. But there are a lot of grammer issues with it. I ...

I think the idea behind this is strong and holds a lot of potential, but I;m not sure you quite know what to do with it. This seems like it ...

I really like this poem, its full of raw emotion. I literally cried reading it. It's such a sad thing and even sadder that it's true. It portrays your guilt ...

This poem is very emotional, but while I think you mean for it to be sad it seems almost like the writer is mad. Some lines seem to rhyme But ...

Aww! That is so sweet and extremely well written. I really love how she describes her daughter and how the poem is written directly to her. Maybe she could add ...

My attempt at poetry once more. I hope it's alright xD Killing is fairly easy when I can turn your face pale white. I am the misfortune fate forced upon ...

I love how you described her as a replacement, it's a good way of looking at things. I really like how time goes in this poem. I think maybe you ...

This is definitely a very passionate poem, its good to see someone speaking about about the horrors of racism. I love how true and real it is. But maybe you ...