emmylou1995

Because it is an actual place

Thank you for your comment! I'm sorry it made you cry, and no, I've never had it but I've known someone who did. Thank you, again.

Actually, dragonfpheonix, you got everything right. I meant for the imagery to be that way, and I meant for there to be no punctuation. The second part of the poem ...

Dark, saying that if knivesandpens tells anyone, they are going to send her to an asylum IS NOT helpful. Its not kind either and its not true. I think knivesandpens ...

I don't have time to review your piece, but I really really liked it! I struggle with the same kind of compulsion, especially when playing cards, I have to have ...

Thanks so much!

I thought that this story was really, really good. I loved the concept behind it. As sbear1231 said, it did show a darker side of humanity that made the story ...

I agree with everyone here when they say to slow down a bit. One of the other things that really irked me was the fact that you didn't split your ...

Your review made me laugh, because is is only the first half of my first chapter. Maybe I do have too much going on in each chapter. Thanks for the ...

Okay, let me say this. I've done quick fiction before and it isn't supposed to be like this. You have a really good image and an interesting story with some ...

I really liked the message here. I think you have a lot of good images, my favorite one being the line "when men come crawling home like ants, and women ...

My uncle has lived with CF his entire life, and the Doctors say he has been lucky to live so long. We had a scare a month ago where it ...

This is horribly and painfully beautiful.

Thank you all, and yes, the next few chapters will be very forthcoming. ANd for some reason, my italics thing doesn't work. SO the last two sentances are in italics, ...

I have split the first chapter into two parts to that it is overall easier to read!