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@LiesonLies: B-.

@justtrying: A chickadee is a type of bird. It's also a pet name. :) Thanks for the feedback, everyone!

Thanks, guys. I'll edit and see how it turns out--I will keep your advice in mind. :)

Thanks for the comments! The poem's lack of capitalization is completely intentional, however. Thanks anyway for pointing it out!

Thanks! I've finally completed the poem now, after much effort, and renamed it 'Him': I wish I had a tattoo covering my heart saying, he— he was here. I wish ...

You did a really, really good job! The "countdown" was a great idea and was really effective, too!

My favorite haiku is the last one. :) Really lovely. I envy your talent--I wish I could write like this!

I really love your piece. It's beautifully written. Good job on this. You're great at lists--why don't you try doing a few more?

That's a brilliant poem, nekros. It really is. I have absolutely no criticism. Just brilliant.

I liked the dialogue in the first part, keep going! It's pretty fun. :)

My favorite part was the last line. You really make it clear that this event meant something to you, that this person meant something to you. I'm definitely glad to ...

Thank you for the review! I will work on it and keep your advice in mind :) EDIT: Here, I've had another go and added to it: I wish I ...