emjayc

Hi, I'm here to review :) I like dragons so yay ^^ I'll review as I read (the usual spiel): You need to capitalize Lord Dark's name consistently. Also, the ...

Hello, I'm here to read another one of your pieces :) As I begin reading this, there are already vivid images running through my mind. I enjoy the opening of ...

Hello, I know this poem is several months old, but since you've been giving me such wonderful, informative reviews I wanted to look into what you've written. I know very ...

I agree with what the Raven said below, so I will try not to reiterate. This was a really unique format for a story and I didn't know if I'd ...

I hope that it’s okay that I don’t know the song you based this on. I also hope I don’t sound stupid admitting that! But this looks like a really ...

Hello, I'm emjay and I'm here to read and review your wonderful piece :) So far I've read a bit of it and it's very good. I enjoy your word ...

Awesome poem :) And if your age is the one that it actually says on your profile, then I'm older than you and I just joined the site! :O Anyway, ...

Hello, emjay reporting for duty ^^ This looks like another interesting and amazing piece! I already liked the other one a lot and I'm sure I'll enjoy this one too. ...

Okay, so I am going to give you my honest opinion about this story so was fantastic. I find it extremely well-written and even thoroughly-written. Your choice of language is ...

Hello, emjay here :) I read your poem and I like the theme a lot! However, I do have a few suggestions to improve the structure of your piece: ~I ...

Hi, emjay here to review your story :) I agree with everything the reviewer below said. You could definitely expand on the story you have here, provide a back story, ...

Hi, I'm emjay and I saw you posted the third chapter and so I decided to start from the beginning in order to understand what was happening :) I shall ...

My mind has been blown. That was great! I'm glad I read it and I think I'm a higher percentile more intelligent for having read it. Your diction is perfect ...

Hello, I don't know a lot about poetry, but I do know a decent poem when I read one. This was more than a decent poem though; this was truly ...

Wow, this is a great poem! :D Your diction is very vivid and I can almost feel what you must have felt at certain times during the scene because you ...