emilycaroleena

Hi! I haven't read some of the other reviews, so I might repeat some things. Okay so the Prologue is awesome, I really like the feel of this. It's really ...

I loved that you rhymed! I've always been a sucker for that that stuff. This poem gave me the chills especially since I just found a spider on my bed ...

I think the overall story is okay, I was just a bit confused. I think you should re-read it and ask yourself... "Who is Amy to the narrator?" "Why are ...

This Intro sounds great! There are couple recommendations I would do is check your wording. There are some words that don't seem like they belong in that particular sentence. For ...

This short story was quite humorous, I could definitely relate with the characters with my own group of friends. And I'll tell you that I am exactly like Cozart around ...

This short story was awesome! I loved that the reader (myself) was actually more aware of their own body. I'm really into horror and thriller type of stuff and this ...