emilia9ludenberg

Sorry, I don't understand, but thank you anyways!

Hello, thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you found this relatable and enjoyed it loads :) Yes, the italics are the sirens speaking, and the purpose of ...

Thank you! I tried to make this easier to understand, and to actually include some nice, natural imagery (for once), so I am glad it worked out. :)

Hey Lim! Thanks for reviewing :) Thank you so much for your feedback; in the future, I will probably redraft some of this and try to organise my thoughts in ...

Hello! Thank you for your review, very detailed and helpful, and I agree with your points, especially the one about breaking this down into smaller poems (perhaps a collection?) - ...

Hiya, thanks so much for the review:) Thank you for comparing me to Bob Dylan; from what I've heard, he's great As to the questions about word-choice, I did intentionally ...

Hello :) Thank you for your review; genuinely really appreciate it considering I have re read my poem and already feel like it could be so much better Apologies for ...

Hello, this was absolutely hilarious. Precisely the trauma I will be experiencing next year- you seem to have a vast knowledge of different types of poems, whilst simultaneously writing simplistic ...

Hello, just thought I'd leave a review. Immaculate poem, genuinely- the rhymes sound unique and impactful, really getting your message across. The allegories that resemble contradictions of the omnipo