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Re: forgetting/the sailboat
Thank you!
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: fifty cents for the pink pony
Hello, thank you for another review! I'm glad you're enjoying my poems! Thanks for the shoutout! First I just want to say how much it means to me what you ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: forgetting/the sailboat
Hi haraya! Thank you for your review! I agree with you about the line about the sunset-I definitely can get rid of that word. I'll work on refining it and ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: forgetting/the sailboat
whoops-wrote that on mobile! My apologies for the technological mishap
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: forgetting/the sailboat
Hey alliyah! Thank you for your review! I think what you said about formatting was really interesting. I love poetry and writing poems but I haven%u2019t really ever experimented with ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: sunshine
I agree about the balance of your poem! I think the revisions you've made are great! Thank you for your response (:
Jun 4, 2020 -
Re: a new day too dear
Thank you for the review!
Jan 3, 2020 -
Re: a new day too dear
Thank you for the review! Happy New Year!
Jan 1, 2020 -
Re: mud aglow
Thank you for your review!
Oct 15, 2018 -
Re: mothmen
Thank you for the review! This was really helpful (:
Oct 15, 2018 -
Re: mud aglow
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D
Oct 11, 2018 -
Re: mothmen
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it (:
Oct 10, 2018 -
Re: mothmen
Thank you for your review!
Oct 10, 2018 -
Re: Momma's Boy
I thought your edits made the story a lot clearer to understand! Especially the part with the two people talking about Jum - I understood it a lot better this ...
Oct 8, 2018 -
Re: The Unraveling of Maggie Rose (Part One)
Thank you so much for the review! I appreciate all your advice, and I'll keep it in mind as I write the next parts and as I come back and ...
Jun 9, 2018