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Re: Pills / Needles
Hello, first can I just say that I really loved your dual narrative stance on this. It is really breathtaking as most poets focus on one persons narrative stance. I ...
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: Living in a dream
Hi There, I really liked this Poem. Short Poetry always has this way of bringing out an issue or idea in a way which causes it to seem significant yet ...
Jun 17, 2015 -
Re: Beautiful Graced Walls of the Mind
Hello there, Wow... This poem is really good. You use imagery in a subtle way to convey meaning. You really understand how to create an effective image and it shows ...
Feb 18, 2015 -
Re: Viva Christo Rey!
Hello there, This is an amazing piece. It captures the voices of a nation, an army, unified behind their king. By your use of word choice and subtle imagery, you ...
Feb 18, 2015 -
Re: Sacrifice
Hello there, I love your poem and I really want to give you a hug just now. You managed to convey so much emotion through this poem and it is ...
Feb 18, 2015 -
Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 1
Right, first of all I love you. This story is captivating, it draws you in and I really want to read more. This story is short and sweet, but yet ...
Feb 18, 2015 -
Re: The Despair of a Broken Heart.
You are an amazing writer. You conveyed your pain effectively through word choice and your use of subtle imagery is amazing. This overall is a great piece and I enjoyed ...
Feb 3, 2015
