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eleutheromania

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: What the Water Could Not Hold

    Yes, a lot of my poems have words that don't perfectly rhyme. I've rhymed battle with chapel before so...lol. Thank you though, for the help and advice about future endeavors ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: What the Water Could Not Hold

    Thanks for reading my poem and for sharing your input on how to grow and make things better.

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bullets

    Thank you for the constructive criticism. I'm very aware how nontraditional this poem is. I just wrote it in the frenzy of passionate emotions. It's more for spoken word than ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bullets

    Thanks you so much for reading it and for taking the time to give your very kind opinion about my writing. It was very cool reading your review, because I ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bullets

    Thanks for taking the time to read what I wrote and give a review.

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bullets

    Thank you, so much, for reading my words just before you laid down to dream. Thank you for telling me how they made you feel.

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Culture Re: the sky caught the smoke rings you blew from your lips

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    This is wonderful. You have so much imagery and emotion poured over your words its hard not to drown in them (that's a good thing). I loved this poem. Not ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Knew

    Thank you! :)

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Eulogy for a Dragonfly

    I thought this was really beautiful. The acknowledgement of the death around you as well as the gratitude for the life it once possessed it very deep and significant. I ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Knew

    Thank you! Your review made me laugh. Really appreciate the positivity and creativeness in sharing it. :)

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Knew

    Thank you. I've been writing prose for a long time, but I've only been writing poetry for about a month so my consistency with rhyming schemes still needs a lot ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Knew

    Thanks so much for your review. You can just call me mania if you like. The meaning of the word the entire word is an intense and irresistible desire for ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Toothpaste

    I see the point that Audy has. I don't usually write with so much capitalization actually. I have a few other poems I haven't published just yet, and most of ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Toothpaste

    Thank you for the input and positive feedback.

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Toothpaste

    Thanks so much for your input and opinions. I'll definitely keep what you've said in mind about capitalization in mind the next time I'm writing.

    Jul 15, 2014


I can't understand why people are frightened by new ideas. I'm frightened of old ones.
— John Cage