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I'm assuming fire.

And sorry for the multiple responses. YWS eats them if they're too long. :(

The only reason dialogue is this important in this piece is because the piece is all dialogue. You don't have narration to fall back on and grab interest, and the ...

You can tell a lot about a character from the way they speak, if the dialogue is good quality. You need to think about their speech patterns. Words that they ...

Even if you do talk with a lot of imagery, the way you speak is different than the way you'd type it (I guarantee it). Also, you imagined her tone ...

It's not done yet! I'll try to finish it tonight :P

I'm almost scared to post chapter four. And Koby's Parker's little brother. It's specified in... um. It was the scene where Parker and Braz had that in-hospital heart-to-heart, whenever that ...

Your reviews make me so happy xD I've concluded that I will take my time with this novel, because it ultimately doesn't have a plot (the plot is their life), ...

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It's said that it's all a sarcastic response to a homophobic teacher's assignment ;)

He's kind of perfect. I'm giving him a novel of his own, at some point.

Ahh, I see it now xD Sorry about that! post a link on my wall when you've got the next bit up :)

You're such a self esteem boost sometimes xD

i love you