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Re: First few bits from my unnamed novel. *Edited!*
Chapter 2 has been posted!!!
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: First few bits from my unnamed novel. *Edited!*
Okay, I shall fix those! :) Thanks! The guy in the spoiler is connected to the story, but you don't figure it out utnil later on... ;)
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Tribe-A New Tomorrow Fanfic-Chapter 1
Awesome!! That I will do! :D
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: My heart in your hands.
Wow...thanks guys!! I'm smiling majorly right now after reading those comments!! I'm super glad you liked it so much! My old teachers all agreed with me that if I was ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Memories
Wow! Really good! I might seperate where you placed a comma in the middle of the lines into two seperate lines, but that's just me! It flowed so well!! I ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: First few bits from my unnamed novel. *Edited!*
Anybody else have anything to say?
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
Once again, nothing to correct that hasn't been corrected... This was as good as the prologue! Loved it!
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Monster
Absolutely amazing!! It made me shudder at the last sentence and gave me goosebumps. Very well done!!
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: fear.
A few minor mistakes, but very very good! There should be their and Im should be I'm other than that it's great!
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: First few bits from my unnamed novel. *Edited!*
Oops... Thanks for pointing those out! I'll get to fixing them in my good draft ASAP! Grammar isn't my best subject. Although the 'somethings' are only in there to make ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: You make me wanna feel
Wow...really good! I love the 'dark cinderella' and 'evil night' gives it sort of an interesting, earie feel. way to go!
Mar 22, 2010