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Pebbles I'm assuming because every road is built up of many of them. It's like a metaphor for every small memory creating memory lane, also a road. Let me know ...

oops... facepalm Sorry jem!! I completely forgot about the lime name!! haha! I just like the name Andrew I guess... :lol:

Not at all crescent! I actually like that better! I will get on fixing it up! ;) Thanks!!

Thanks guys!! I'll add more to the funeral scene, and more about their history. I wanted to put it in, but I didn't know how long it would get so ...

Thanks! I've got to add a few things then! I'll add them now since I actually have time... Thanks skins! Oh, and discussion about suicide isn't really something I find ...

Thanks cres!! I knew I was forgetting something!! Mark's funeral!! Le'Duh me! xD I'll add it in there as soon as I have time :)

Thanks!!!! My grammar and spell check on my computer wasn't working when I wrote this, which could account for a few of the mistakes... But thanks!! :D

Thanks!! It did help!! I believe I got everything fixed up! Is there anything else??

Yep!! Quite a bit better! There are still a few things that could be edited, but hey! There is never any possible way to make them perfect... I know for ...

:lol: No prob!! Amazing parody!

haha!! Thanks!! I fixed up that part! Oops! :) Glad you liked it though!

Wow!! That's so weird!! And sorta creepy...especially since I don't like Twilight that much... *Shudders* I can't believe it that it's pretty much existant though!

hahaha!! Thanks!! I do agree that I did get carried away...but it was hard not to. I think I was probably ranting because I wrote it right after somebody made ...

Hey!! I really loved this!! Nicely done!

Revised. Any other tips?