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Isha here, as requested, to review. Okie dokie, so 1) I actually really hate zombie books, in most cases. And zombie movies. And zombie video games. 2) I'm going to ...

Aria! Isha here to review as requested. H'okay so this was actually ridiculously cute, and really sad, all at the same time. I kind of have a soft spot for ...

Hey there! Isha here to review as requested (duh). First off, I really like the premise for this poem. It's full of things that we forget (that there's always been ...

And here's chapter two! Or. I suppose it goes up to chapter six. Whatever. And everyone's pointed out pretty much everything that I'd have said about writing style. I must ...

Wellp, here as requested, and I'm afraid that I'm going to have to be a bit harder on you than the previous reviewers ;) Alrighty, so, the first thing that ...

YOU DIDN'T KILL SUCH :D But um whoa, you totally disintegrated Amy, and poor Paul has to stay a frog. Amy's impending doom was not a plot twist I saw ...

YOU KILLED IS-NOW-SUCH? Well, that was just rude. Rude and I didn't see it coming, so hey, plot twists are A+. Even really depressing plot twists that involve killing a ...

Whoa. Well, that sucks for them. Way to go, Girl Who Is Now Such (I think girl, anyway. I apologize if I missed them saying her name anywhere- I'll just ...

Fortis! I am here to review as requested, and I will do my absolute best to bring something new to the table. Okay, so, first of all, my brain is ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review. :) First off, I must say that, for the most part, the writing in this was pretty excellent. It flowed well, and the ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review. :) Now, first of all, this has so much potential to be such a lovely, lovely piece of work. It's short, but sweet, ...

Isha here for a review! And holy- okay, so I really enjoyed this story. I do have some nitpicks, and some things that I'd like to point out, but the ...

Hey there, Roundsquare! Isha here to review as requested. (: Alright, so. This piece was really very well-written for the most part. It flowed well, was easy to read, and ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review. (: And I'm going to pull a bit of a Birkhoff on you here and critique the poem itself, and try to stay ...

Duuuude, I so have to attempt to review this. Which will be hard, because I can't make myself find any nitpicks, but here goes, anyway (also because I like you, ...