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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dust and Shadows

    Jasmine. *tips hat* The first thing I have to say is that I usually don't like short poems much (I like lots of imagery and lines of emotion and such), ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Sickened Mind

    Hello again, Matthews! This will probably be a shorter review, since I've already been at this once before. (Hope you don't mind too much.) But you said you had done ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Know I'm Here(3)

    Hey Shrubs! So, the others seem to have gotten through everything already, and Yuri fished through with nitpicks and those sorts of things, so I'll just give you an overview ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Five Lucky YWSers

    Y'know which one I like best? Mine! The first. Even if it wasn't about me I'd still like it the most. It's kind of...awesome. I still like mine five billion ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Embarrassed

    I saw this, and for some reason, I felt very compelled to review it! So, I will do just that. xD Right off the bat, I want to say one ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Thorns & Roses [1.1]

    Here as promised, and the first thing I'm going to say is: I was going to do do a review-as-I-read, but then I read the first few paragraphs... and then ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Flames of Hope

    I'm here as requested. :) I can see that this already has a lot of reviews, so I may be quite repetitive xD The first thing I'm going to tell ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Newborn Feelings (LOVE POEM)

    Hey, I just thought I'd stop by and throw a quick review out there. xD This may come off as harsh, but... my poetry reviews usually are, nowadays. The first ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Forgotten Who

    Hello Oolo! Here to review, as I so promised on chat. :) The first thing I want to say about this is that it was definitely an interesting poem. You ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dread the Dark

    Hey Dream! Well, you know me already, so I won't like... introduce myself of anything. Just thought I'd come review this for you! :) The first thing I'd like to ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Know I'm Here(1)

    Here to review, as you so requested. ;) Nitpicks: "What's the matter, baby?" He gawked, but still sounding like an echo. I turned back to look at Eric, his lips ...

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Battle For Happiness (Edited)

    Hey Spike, here as requested. There are already a lot of reviews here, so I don't know how much I'll be able to add. First off, I'd like to say ...

    Dec 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I, Skinny Girl

    Hello, Isha here. The first thing I'll say is that I agree with what the others said about loving this poem. The emotion was strong and it was so uniquely ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: abuse part 2

    Isha here to review. :) The first thing I want to say was that I actually really did like this. Like Purple said, you forgot to capitalize a few 'i's' ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Golden Wings- chapter 4

    Hey, Isha here to review. :) The first thing I would like to point out is your first paragraph: I slammed my locker in a hurry. Today was Tuesday and ...

    Nov 28, 2010


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